Today I played basketball and soccer with my church youth group. It was pretty fun. I was happy that I could actually go out with them and have a good time, because I don’t have anything else to do today, besides this blog. The feedback that I got today was pretty good, but the thing is the paper that we had to fill out did not have a section where we could say whether or not we agreed or enjoyed the common place paper that we were reading. I know that there were a few common place papers that were well written, but I could care less about them, and I would never take my own time to read them on my own. Others I thought were extremely interesting and I wanted to read on. If anyone read my paper and would like to give me some feedback on it, please do. I value the opinions of my classmates who have read my common place paper, because it is intended for an audience, not myself, so whoever read my paper can give me some valuable feedback as to what an audience is looking for. I also think that the more students that like my common place paper, the better the chances our professor will like what she is reading and give me a better grade. The title of my common place paper is “Simple Steps on How to Conquer the World” If you remember this paper, please comment and give me some feedback on how you liked it.
I read your paper and I really liked it. It was in the top three of the ones I read. I thought it was really interesting and I think that a lot of people can relate to it. I think that it also had a good message in the paper. You also have a really good title, I think it works well with your paper. Your paper was one of the only ones that I actually read all the way through. The others got boring and I ended up skimming them but your paper kept my attention the whole time. Overall your paper was really well done.
ReplyDeleteI love soccer. I watch England soccer every weekend. I like to play too but I guess I'm not good at playing^^
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